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Some days I look into a mirror, and wish that I could disappear, and curse the day that I was forced to being,
But then I see your face and know, that evils happen even so, without risk and loss there’s reason not for living.
I ask myself is it just chance, or fate or luck or circumstance, that takes me on the path that I’m now walking
Then something whispers there is more, a life and quest worth fighting for, and you can have it simply if you don’t give in

Often I must ask myself, is this the day I ask for help, I know my strength has vanished into nothing
I fell lost without a hope, down I go no safety rope, to grab onto and stop me fast from fading
Fall until I see a light, there lies my chance right in my sight, a face of one I never knew would catch me
And then I see I need not ask, help is there within my grasp, I had no clue that friends could be so caring

I gaze upon my life again, with bitterness and filthy sin, and ask myself could any care to care for me
But then I see your face and know, my past is past just let it go, and take a chance and find out how great things might be
Until every star goes out and dies, and I fall back inside my lies, that I could never be more than the man I see
I will protect you and be strong, ‘cause I suspect my fears are wrong, faith hope and love: those three will set me free
©2006-2010 ~Knightofvictory
:iconknightofvictory:

Author's Comments

This poem was inspired not by any one specific event or one certain friend, but is kind of a summary of what people have done for me when I needed it most. Few things are more amazing then seeing love from others when you feel like hating yourself.

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:iconkurimi:
This is beautiful. Your structure is different than I'm used to reading, too, so I like that.

The love, acceptance, and support of friends is irreplacable. Something I have come to realize recently is that in even my friends, it's just another quiet whisper of God: "I love you, I care about you, I want to bless you."

No matter how downtrodden we become, how worthless we feel, if we take the time to listen, we can still hear God's whisper that makes life worth living all over again.
More often than not, that whisper comes to me through friends, too.

"Thanks be to God for his inexpressible gift!" (2 Cor 9:15)
:iconakel-rin-dama:
I agree with Kurimi on this one. I really like the honesty here as well. It's so foreward and to the point, plus, I feel the stripping of masks here and not the adding on of them.

The ability to be real is a true strength, and coupled with the ability to realize that God created us to depend on each other to grow closer to Him and in our walks, those two are amazing gifts to have and you demonstrate both here.

"Though the outward nature is wasting away, the inward nature is being renewed day by day." ~2 Cor 4:16
:iconshimmie:
Dude, Victor, that's really good. Would it not be a great song? I'm favoriting it. :D I think everyone feels like the beginning of the first stanza sometimes... but hopefully they have someone to help them out, too. Well-spoken ^^

I have no Bible verse to end with... alas... I am inadequate... Ah wait, hold on, just to follow the trend, here's one I like but doesn't have anything to do with the poem: "In repentance and rest is your salvation; in quietness and trust is your strength." ~Isaiah 40:something

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One does not simply ROCK into Mordor! :headbang:
:iconmoushikaneru:
Hmm...this settles it... You are officially cooler than I... I've had thought along those lines before but every attempt to put them into words has failed miserably. Perhaps I'll put up ome of my own poetry when I'm in the mood...just don't expect much from it.

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Making the hopeless romantic guy look cool again!™
:iconknightofvictory:
Actually, when I was first writing it I "heard" it as song verses. The melody has long eluded me, however. Too bad, otherwise this would make a perfect theme song for my life.
:iconshimmie:
It's so cool that you could put the "song verse" thought into action, though, because it's definitely song-ish. Oh, if only someone we knew was musically talented! (The best I can do is memorize the C-buttons for the ocarina songs :()

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One does not simply ROCK into Mordor! :headbang:
:iconraeest-bee:
So, I feel like a really bad friend for just now commenting on your poem. I've had it in my "To Read" pile, and I just didn't do it. Now I'm glad I have.

This was great, Victor! I mean, I liked it a lot. You have a wonderful message here, and I like how you worded each...sentence? line? with rhymes. Very interesting form.

I'm glad you have friends like this in your life. That's always awesome. I hope you can continue to enjoy such beautiful friendships. Remember this: friendships are a blessing from God. Don't take your friends for granted. That's the only lesson I can give you, and you probably don't need that lesson. :)

Well, Kenshin, I have no words of wisdom for you. So, I'll leave you now. Continue writing, and let me read more of it! (I'll get around to reading your story, I promise!)

Toodleoo!

(Get well soon! Whit told me you were sick!)

-Rae

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Ciao Bella...
:iconknightofvictory:
Hey, thanks for the response, and don't worry about not having time to read my stuff; time is a commodity we all have in short supply. I know I really haven't had a chance to comment on much of your poetry yet myself. (and I've had since when I got my account, what... November???? Has it been that long? Gah!) Anyways, I will give you some comments on journals or postings or something soon, I just tend to not dwell as much on this site as many of you guys. Of course the plus of that is, since I don't update often, I don't check to see if people look at my stuff often! Rest assured everything I post can be taken at "face value" (couldn't help myself) and I don't mind if I do not even get a single reply. That being said, thanks for the the compliment! You are far too kind Megumi!
:iconraeest-bee:
LOL. I consider myself to be a power spender here at dA. Basically, that means I spend time that is in short supply here and at three other sites. I go in, get out and go on. That's the habit I've developed. Besides, I never have time to really linger. If I write meaningful comments, they have to come within ten seconds of my initial reaction or else they just don't come. Or at least, that's the estimate.

Anywho, I'm going to reply to whatever comment you made on my journal when I get done with this... so with no further ado... off to your other comment!

By the way, nice pun.

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Ciao Bella...

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